Give each speaker a private aim
A conversation is rarely only an exchange of information. Someone wants reassurance; someone wants to leave without appearing rude. Before writing dialogue, make a private note about what each character hopes will happen. You do not need to reveal those notes to the reader. They help you choose the apparently harmless subjects that carry the real conversation.
Use the nearby subject
Two people who cannot discuss a departure might argue about who should keep a plant. The plant should matter as a real object, not merely as a symbol placed there by the writer. Perhaps one person always forgot to water it. Their history gives the small argument weight. Let the reader recognise a larger question without spelling it out in the next sentence.
Make silence specific
A pause can be hesitation, refusal, distraction or care. Give it a physical consequence. A person straightens a receipt, pours water into an already full glass or puts a coat back on its hook. Avoid explaining every gesture. One well-chosen action is often clearer than several sentences describing the emotional state you want the reader to infer.
Listen for the unnecessary answer
Read the scene aloud and remove one answer that simply repeats what the question already tells us. Replace it with an action or a response to a different concern. Then check that the conversation remains understandable. Indirect dialogue should reward attention rather than force the reader to solve a puzzle the characters themselves do not seem to understand.
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